I like the composition but I am breaking the portrait photographer's golden rule of keeping the family close up in the frame. I like this for a large wall hanging, but it might be a big too scaled for small prints.
I like this one
Zombies with Dissolving Bones
I take photos like this to lighten the mood, keep people relaxed, and give people's smile muscles a break. I'm guessing you won't hang this one your wall but hope you get a chuckle from it.
I kind of like this one
Hannah and Ben look a bit American Gothic and so does Elsa and Esther! Cute! Other kids look cute too!
Where did Eve go?
I still like the concept. I'll look back through these pics to see if I can find a decent one.